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Review Detail of Duck_God in Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

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fanfic killed my interest when at chapter 18 he wanted to help bell from the shadows like wtf he didn't even meet the guy why does he need to be worried about bell, like taking ais or ryuu isn't really gonna change a lot of things, maybe ais since bell fell in love with her but seriously why didn't u just reincarnate the mc as bell if u don't want to change the plot so much like whats the point of mc going to danmachi if he's not getting the main heroine is he even the mc anymore, and if he wants to go for more power danmachi world isn't exactly the best world to be op since most of their characters are city level at best anyways this was just my preference for the story don't mind it too much

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Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

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