Review Detail of fadhilla in Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

You know I've read the story but don't post this here even if you are writing for fun because a lot of other people has done that not all of them are good but those that are bad are the same as this one it's unreadable because you don't even put any effort to correcting those typo and disrespect the original creators of the world you are creating your fanfiction ENGLISH IS NOT MY MAIN LANGUAGE IS JUST AND EXCUSE What about the Mc hmmm He is 18 years old ***** male Read a lot of fanfiction and other novels but makes wishes for something that is very questionable Has EMIYA SHIRO SINDROME " of those people at that village is going to get attack by monsters I'm gonna force my body and even sacrifice my life to save them" that's ok BUT "Oh these villagers saved me by helping to take care of me while I'm unconscious they seem to be good people ok I'm going to get them to move to my PRIVATE INNER WORLD THAT MY harem candidate is living because if I don't do that more villagers are going to die because of monster attacks " Really he is 18 for gods sake he is In DANMACHI where there is monster even outside of the city people die all the time even in dungeons people die and you sent him to DANMACHI with fucking EMIYA SHIRO SINDROME Oh not just that you know he is 18 right he choose to enter a hiperbolic time chamber for 6 years making his mental age around 24 right Now goes to the hostess of fertility got threatened by a girl and suddenly have a freaking trauma to every other living female and has the mindset to kill said girl just to save himself Oh you think that's it. Mc goes to see Hephaestus see her cursed eye and suddenly choose to sacrifice everything he has just to cure her Every other Oc is also different this is not DANMACHI anymore if u change the OC Character it's freaking AU DANMACHI and even then just fucking EMIYA SHIRO SINDROME is just already makes this novel shits