I had truly tried... I tried to read it and give it the benefit of "Everything would be okay in next chapter"... And yeah.. This is honestly a bad fanfic and it's not the "English is not my first language" type of problem...
Mikejd
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LIKEWell author just bsed his way in the story..... Even if it's his first story or first time writing or English is not first language......he can at least think what he is writing.....but no he just put whatever came his mind.....and didn't even bother to check..... Also the name.....dude even in a different you don't mistake a name..... And he just..... forget it.....
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:Well author just bsed his way in the story..... Even if it's his first story or first time writing or English is not first language......he can at least think what he is writing.....but no he just put whatever came his mind.....and didn't even bother to check..... Also the name.....dude even in a different you don't mistake a name..... And he just..... forget it.....