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Review Detail of Kokushibou in Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv43yrKokushibou

Just read chapter 17-19, tbh this killed the novel (i was thinking of reading this, then i saw that the chapter 17 was named traumatized and skipped to this and found out that this is just a cringy danmachi fanfic (which idk why is happening pretty often, i guess danmachi fans are for the most part weird people.) The mc is a crybaby, which is a huge turn off for me. I mean to be scared of death is normal for a random Teenager (idk if he was in the dungeon, but in my opinion he should not be scared like this.) But if you prove your innocence, why be scared of a women (after this he got scared of all women, which is just stupid tbh.) Just read it yourself, if you found this good. Then have fun, i think it tried to be "realistic" but in the end, it was exaggerated af. The mc is pathetic to say the least.... now i know again why i don't read danmachi fanfics, because 95% are complete utter trash. Danmachi fanfics don't have any creativity, it's always a System with nothing special. The only time im reading danmachi fanfics are, when the mc was in another already and is pretty strong. Because it's just annoying to see some arrogant kids, who have little power. Toy with the mc, like he some s*x toy. And why did he want to kill the girl that scared him? So he can take lives but when it comes to his own, he is crying like a little bit*h? The Author is probably deleting this (if you do, im spamming this with 1 star reviews btw.) Tbh i don't know why he even is in danmachi, power? No, they are dozens worlds where you get waaaaay faster stronger, the only reason i see is for the girls (even though they are better girls in other worlds(my opinion btw) and what i found stupid too is the God, i mean why this " i reincarnate you because i want entertainment" bs (btw i only read sypnosis of this, but the sypnosis said it itself.) Just do a reincarnation because of karma points, or something like that. Reincarnation because of "entertainment" is long not good anymore (many don't like that, it feels like the mc has no privacy.) So this is another thing which makes this novel in my opinion, utter trash.(the people only used it, because they could not think of something better.) The mc should get tortured or something like that because his mind is so weak, i almost cringed to death. I only read 2 chapters, i don't want to know how he is in the others. But this is all just MY opinion, if you are okay with stuff like this. Then feel free to read this, and author, don't delete this or im gonna spam your ass with 1 star reviews. Good Luck anyway.

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Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4Kokushibou

Just read chapter 18 a little more, and what do i see? He wants to help Bell from the shadows(i swear, this is frustrating af.) Yeah.... nah this is a perfect example of stuff i hate, what is now missing is ntr or some sh*t. So bye bye👋 Good Luck with your fanfic👋

Mikejd
MikejdAuthorMikejd

thx but i want danmachi to be the first one but next will be a secret and lastly thank you

Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4Kokushibou

This is totally fine but i just don't like the mc. But Good Luck anyway.👋👍

Mikejd:thx but i want danmachi to be the first one but next will be a secret and lastly thank you
LaurentCross
LaurentCrossLv13LaurentCross

Thanks for saving my time!

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

thank you for ur noble sacrifice.

Unchainedx
UnchainedxLv5Unchainedx

Thanks for pass the "word" foward.

JohnnieWalker
JohnnieWalkerLv4JohnnieWalker

i jsut wish to read a fanfic where the omc kills the mcs for the lols

Syahrul_Azhar
Syahrul_AzharLv3Syahrul_Azhar

There is one the tittle is "The killer of Mc's" its a nice one

JohnnieWalker:i jsut wish to read a fanfic where the omc kills the mcs for the lols
JohnnieWalker
JohnnieWalkerLv4JohnnieWalker

oh nice, gonna look for that

Syahrul_Azhar:There is one the tittle is "The killer of Mc's" its a nice one
DragonGod999x
DragonGod999xLv4DragonGod999x

there is a good danmachi fanfic the number 1 in the rankings right now, the title is endless path: infinite cosmos, it's the best fanfic the mc is progressively op and had a harem but not the typical cringy one but the fwelings are through development not love at first sight.

Kokushibou:Just read chapter 18 a little more, and what do i see? He wants to help Bell from the shadows(i swear, this is frustrating af.) Yeah.... nah this is a perfect example of stuff i hate, what is now missing is ntr or some sh*t. So bye bye👋 Good Luck with your fanfic👋
Young_Dexter_1905
Young_Dexter_1905Lv13Young_Dexter_1905

thank you, most of the things you mentioned, really piss me off, so I'm glad I didn't have to go through that torment lol.

Kokushibou:Just read chapter 18 a little more, and what do i see? He wants to help Bell from the shadows(i swear, this is frustrating af.) Yeah.... nah this is a perfect example of stuff i hate, what is now missing is ntr or some sh*t. So bye bye👋 Good Luck with your fanfic👋
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4Kokushibou

Young_Dexter_1905:thank you, most of the things you mentioned, really piss me off, so I'm glad I didn't have to go through that torment lol.
I_liek_rainbowsss
I_liek_rainbowsssLv4I_liek_rainbowsss

What a noble sacrifice...

DaoistSoulDive
DaoistSoulDiveLv4DaoistSoulDive

that is probably the most boring fanfic on webnovel

DragonGod999x:there is a good danmachi fanfic the number 1 in the rankings right now, the title is endless path: infinite cosmos, it's the best fanfic the mc is progressively op and had a harem but not the typical cringy one but the fwelings are through development not love at first sight.
DragonGod999x
DragonGod999xLv4DragonGod999x

nahhhh if you're patient enough you'll enjoy it but I temporarily stopped reading it when I read that he left the danmachi world and goes to fate series and left his family that turned me off to the story but I'm still waiting for him to unite all the verses and rule all of it.

DaoistSoulDive:that is probably the most boring fanfic on webnovel
Ultimate_Ciel
Ultimate_CielLv4Ultimate_Ciel

honestly wtf is up with chp 17 i meqn she ripped off your shirt and knocked you out bruh after wakinhg up he straight up started crying like wtf does he have 0 back bone bruh if this happened to me I'll be laughing my ass of at what happened and at myself the guy trained for 6 yars and couldnt even dodge he knocking him out man you completely turned him into a pussy