So far, so good, I admired your writing style. It was definitable and understandable! The progress of the story isn't that bad although the scene quite amusing amd remarkable especially, how you describe the background which took my attention. For such a good story, I suggest the quality of the pages were kinda low and Im not sure of how readers liked it but I prefer to max abit even a little so they would satisfy the remaining journey. Don't worry, I'm looking forward of this story so keep up the good work!❤❤
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LIKEDeleteduser87:Getting a good review from you I feel honoured. Yeah I also struggle about the editing. Thanks your majesty! 😄😆
isharislynkia:Hahah, it's really nothing! And thanks for commenting of my stories either it meant a lot to me❤❤