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Bpaat39
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I was quite enjoying the whole novel right up until chapter 80 ish. The end to beginning of the next few chapters either repeated each other or just plain skipped to a different part of the story. Also the titles don't really make sense. Some of the chapters you basically pay for two pages worth of content you already paid for. ***Spoiler ahead*** For anyone reading up till now im specifically talking about when in the story Charles tries to turn eli against james after setting off a bomb on the ship. Its just a really hard part to get over and it should be fixed and re-released. It barely makes sense. Thanks for reading.

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Galaxy Wars: The Legacy of Light and Darkness

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ranmaro
ranmaroAuthorranmaro

Thanks for pointing this out I have edited the novel more than once and some mistakes might occured here and there Might I ask of which chapter you sensed something isnt right? So I will read and revise that part then tell u here about it Thanks

Bpaat39
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from chapters 87 - 91it starts off with just some dialogue that really doesn't fit transition wise from ch. 86 going into 87. I can mark it when i see it in the 5 chapters mention above. I stopped from there so i can't say that's where the problems end.

ranmaro:Thanks for pointing this out I have edited the novel more than once and some mistakes might occured here and there Might I ask of which chapter you sensed something isnt right? So I will read and revise that part then tell u here about it Thanks
ranmaro
ranmaroAuthorranmaro

Thanks I will start working from there then

Bpaat39:from chapters 87 - 91it starts off with just some dialogue that really doesn't fit transition wise from ch. 86 going into 87. I can mark it when i see it in the 5 chapters mention above. I stopped from there so i can't say that's where the problems end.
ranmaro
ranmaroAuthorranmaro

Hi, just wanted to inform you that I edited these parts. There were many issues there tbh, and now things are quite good. I will also double check on other chapters tomorrow, but as far as I read there is nothing that caught my eyes. If you met anything not in place then I would appreciate leaving a comment there to highlight it for me. Thanks for the help yesterday and sorry for the inconvenience.

Bpaat39
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I did notice the correction and very much enjoyed the content. I have been leaving comments on any chapters that I found more than 1 page worth of repeated content. Sorry if it's any trouble and still very much enjoying the story. Thank you for your time and effort.

ranmaro:Hi, just wanted to inform you that I edited these parts. There were many issues there tbh, and now things are quite good. I will also double check on other chapters tomorrow, but as far as I read there is nothing that caught my eyes. If you met anything not in place then I would appreciate leaving a comment there to highlight it for me. Thanks for the help yesterday and sorry for the inconvenience.
ranmaro
ranmaroAuthorranmaro

No trouble at all, it was all thanks to you I noticed these errors Sigh it was all caused by the arc of Eli character after Charles death I hope things would be great now and I’m pretty much honored you like my story :)

Bpaat39:I did notice the correction and very much enjoyed the content. I have been leaving comments on any chapters that I found more than 1 page worth of repeated content. Sorry if it's any trouble and still very much enjoying the story. Thank you for your time and effort.