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MysticAmy
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I will give myself an honest review. šŸ˜ To be honest, I never thought of giving myself a 5-star review like what others do because I want to do a self-assessment of my writing like how I did it with my other stories. ā˜ŗļø Anyway, here goes! šŸ’Ŗ Writing quality, I honestly give myself a 4. Why? I am not quite satisfied with how I am writing. As I write, sometimes I find the difficulty to express what Iā€™ve been meaning to express and I limit myself to words I already know and used. šŸ§ As a writer, I should further improve myself and narrate better since this is also not my usual fantasy story that I write. But quite frankly, I found myself having the difficulty to do so because of my schedule and from time to time, laziness. šŸ˜… Updating stability, of course, Iā€™d give myself a 5. šŸ˜ I update daily so why the heck not, right? šŸ˜‚ Story development is also a 5. As a writer, I am also enjoying the pace of my story. Itā€™s neither fast nor slowā€”just at the right pacing as I donā€™t rush it. I plan to make this a long story, too, so I hope I can pull it off! Character design I proudly give myself a 5. šŸ˜‚ Iā€™ll be shameless on this part because Iā€™ve been planning my characters either before or DURING writing. The characters done while writing is what amazes me, though. šŸ¤£ I have to write them down on a notebook so I make sure not to mix them up considering that this is a story with harem instilled in itā€”with other unique characters as well! Iā€™m having fun doing characters, actually! šŸ¤© And lastly, world background, 4. To be honest, this is one of the things I am struggling with in writing this story. I find myself having to plot about my setting on the spot, and it gives me the difficulty to backtrack on what I said sometimes so I can avoid loopholes. Other than that, I have to further shape the realm of the book so I can explain other concepts fully. This is going to be a tough, challenging job, but Iā€™ll manage! šŸ’Ŗ An overall rate of 4.6! So far even though I find this challenging to write compared to my other stories, I am having fun and I am learning little by little! Action scenes and fantasy-based writing can get the best of me, though! šŸ˜… Draining, but challenging! šŸ¤© Iā€™ll keep on writing~!

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Accidental Harem: Let's Kiss Again!

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FlynnShin
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I love how you've written what I have read so far!!! You are doing brilliantly with world building as I am only on chapter 5 and honestly, it is super well done so far. Due to the effort you are putting in, I personally would say you're a five in world building. Because you care enough to do your best to avoid plot holes and the like. I give you hecca props for that, my lady friend!!!

MysticAmy
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Aaaaw! Your comment made me feel happy! Thank you~! šŸ„°

FlynnShin:I love how you've written what I have read so far!!! You are doing brilliantly with world building as I am only on chapter 5 and honestly, it is super well done so far. Due to the effort you are putting in, I personally would say you're a five in world building. Because you care enough to do your best to avoid plot holes and the like. I give you hecca props for that, my lady friend!!!