Review Detail of VastoHeaven in One Piece: The eldest saiyan brother.

Item: One Piece: The eldest saiyan brother.
Rating: 5

Review detail

VastoHeavenAuthor3yrVastoHeaven

Ahem I decided to become a shameless author too. Anyway you have to know before you start reading that well it's my first bookmaking so know that my plot is maybe bad or even nonexistent even.. (for now) 'cause I'm really bad at setting a plot... My OC will be an entirely different Saiyan made up by me, and will clearly not respect DBZ logic and laws (it's a fanfic so...). Also the pace is terribly long too, so if you want to read a quick one, well it's not here...yeah... Anyway, if you have anything to say about the book and all that, just comment or do a review, good or bad I don't really care much about it... 🖖✌

One Piece: The eldest saiyan brother.

VastoHeaven

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Replies38

Hayden_AltmanLv4Hayden_Altman

Its been 10 months. Is there an update on the rewrite?

VastoHeaven:I'm currently rewriting itI dont like how I wrote it in later chapters, I kinda lost the ploti decided to rewrite the whole thing insteaddont know when I'll be back, but Im half finished rewriting peace ✌

1mth

writelifeLv2writelife

when will update again?

3yr

richy_ketLv3richy_ket

Yes ok

3yr

richy_ketLv3richy_ket

Yes ok

3yr

Daoist_RahulLv3Daoist_Rahul

was he splat on and he did nothing?

3yr

SufferJustLikeMeLv4SufferJustLikeMe

Who's the love interest author? 🥺

3yr

SecondstepbroLv13Secondstepbro

Dear shameless author I have decided to read ur Work and came to the realization that i have yet to see the queen of one Piece also known as boa hancock and i have already reached chp 31 and am losing my Patients fast All i what to know is what chapter well she be showen

3yr

SecondstepbroLv13Secondstepbro

If its not boa

SufferJustLikeMe:Who's the love interest author? 🥺

3yr

VastoHeavenAuthorVastoHeaven

Okay, I will reply a month later but meh, its Hancock

SufferJustLikeMe:Who's the love interest author? 🥺

3yr

VastoHeavenAuthorVastoHeaven

in the last version yes, but I've changed it

Daoist_Rahul:was he splat on and he did nothing?

3yr

VastoHeavenAuthorVastoHeaven

Ahem, I will reply a month later but meh, its Hancock

Secondstepbro:Dear shameless author I have decided to read ur Work and came to the realization that i have yet to see the queen of one Piece also known as boa hancock and i have already reached chp 31 and am losing my Patients fast All i what to know is what chapter well she be showen
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3yr

VastoHeavenAuthorVastoHeaven

It's Hancock

Secondstepbro:If its not boa
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3yr

SecondstepbroLv13Secondstepbro

np bro

VastoHeaven:Ahem, I will reply a month later but meh, its Hancock

3yr

Goatless_PillowLv2Goatless_Pillow

noice

3yr

HellGod13Lv13HellGod13

is the mc saiyan?

3yr

VastoHeavenAuthorVastoHeaven

Yes, but maybe not what youre searching for though...😅

HellGod13:is the mc saiyan?
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3yr

HellGod13Lv13HellGod13

it's okay ill read it[img=recommend]. I'm at 30something[img=recommend][img=recommend]

VastoHeaven:Yes, but maybe not what youre searching for though...😅

3yr

1theOverlordLv21theOverlord

When will you update author

VastoHeaven:Yes, but maybe not what youre searching for though...😅

3yr

Covert_ShirohigeLv11Covert_Shirohige

Does he get a devil fruit He hasnt eaten one yet

3yr

ALLMightyBunnyLv3ALLMightyBunny

Author I didn't read it yet but did the MC and Boa Hancock have met yet?

3yr

ALLMightyBunnyLv3ALLMightyBunny

Is the MC will become a marine or pirate? if its marine its cool because its rare to have a marine MC if its pirate it cool too[img=recommend] I just want to know[img=recommend]

3yr