There are a couple grammar things here and there but WOW. The development is intense and the characters are all interesting. I'm most interested in seeing her terrible mother develop! Something to keep track of is change of tone, sometimes things go from your usual formal writing to very casual very suddenly. A couple grammar things (but that happens to the best of us ngl) but like... The story itself is 100/10. I like the MC, she's interesting and she has an internal dilemma, which anyone would because it's difficult to get over trauma. So good! It's JUICY, that's what it is. I can't WAIT to read more!!!
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