Review Detail of Sin_Of_Gluttony in Becoming Legend

Hey, I'll try to make this as unbiased as i can, but i can't promise you anything. First : is the story being rewritten? cause i'm merely at chapter 7, and we went from a relatively good writing/grammar to an increasingly worse one, how is that possible ? The novel isn't bad, i've read much worse, the idea behind his powers is pretty cool, but damn the writing/grammar is getting unbearable. And the worse part is that in novels like this, it's way more noticeable than in your average low quality cultivation novel; at least there you read a couple chapter, you realize the story is shit, so you don't even give a damn about grammar. But here, with a story that could be so promising, it's reaaally noticeable. I think the problem here is that author's first language isn't English, so he's trying to do what most non-english people try to do (me included sometimes), which is translating directly from your language, which sound okay in your head, but on paper the actual result is quite bad. Not to mention the continuous shifts between present simple and past simple. The characters are meh, not badly written but still feel quite....fake, like they're just emotionless robots reproducing pre-recorded speeches made by actual people, just to shut down when the attention is moved away from them.