Review Detail of crash_hitter in Becoming Legend
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theme, story line were very good. but the description was very bad. eg: if the MC has a scene to open a cap on bottle. it is enough to say " MC opened the cap of bottle". But the writers describes as " MC touched the cap. then holder the cap on to parallel sides with thumb and forefinger. He then applied torque to rotate the cap......blah....blah...blah........" making the whole story boring.
Becoming Legend
Neorealist
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well I give you low rating, so that you would read my comment. if I give 4 star, I don't think that people will read my review. anyway, story was good, but try to reduce description on single activity and increase no.of.activities.
Neorealist:Hello, thank you for the review. I admit, my writing earlier were more of a purple prose, as what they called it. I will sure to keep in my to avoid unnecessary details. still, I'm quite confused why the review should be that low since you said it yourself the theme and story line were good. I also admit a lot of grammar mistakes that I will soon to correct. thanks anyway. đ
Hello, thank you for the review. I admit, my writing earlier were more of a purple prose, as what they called it. I will sure to keep in my to avoid unnecessary details. still, I'm quite confused why the review should be that low since you said it yourself the theme and story line were good. I also admit a lot of grammar mistakes that I will soon to correct. thanks anyway. đ
I think the author would read and/or reply to the comment if you gave the author a 4 or more star review.
crash_hitter:well I give you low rating, so that you would read my comment. if I give 4 star, I don't think that people will read my review. anyway, story was good, but try to reduce description on single activity and increase no.of.activities.