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Review Detail of Reighlyyy in Becoming Legend

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World background is extremely complex and in some strories it's good but here it doesn't make any sense. You don't understand anything to the point that I doubt even the author knows where this is going. I mean lot of reactions don't make sense at all and the transitions between all the timeline are horrible (no indication or even clues about what's happening) Then the MC. In a great number of LN the MC is one if not the problem and unfortunately in this story it's the case. The MC is not entirely stupid (sometimes it's okay) but he is naive, like really naive. And he stay naive even after he get back his memories. I was expecting if not a cunning MC at least a sly MC who could use his past knowledge to help protect the ones he love (it's his only goal). So for example, a girl he likes told him she doesn't like nobles and then a noble girl ask him to spar with her cause she's interested. He could have accepted to show the girl he likes that until she is strong enough she has to play along with others even if it's only to protect herself. But no the MC straight up reject the noble girl who's by the way narrow minded, which lead to another major problem: the originality. This story is the generic story but with a background a lot more messy than usual but that's all. The same product with a different packaging. It could have potential.

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