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Riritsut_Kanarai
Riritsut_KanaraiLv33yrRiritsut_Kanarai

This novel is very good. amazing fighting. magic and technology combining very well and characters are also written very well. world background is amazing too. But the story has a little flaw and I'm not gonna spoil you. Read it yourself 😂😂 Ohhh and also put your seat belt on. It's gonna be a bumpy ride. Sometimes it might jump into hyperspace 😂😂😂 Good luck fellow reader

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Becoming Legend

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Thank you for the review. I will be sure to put your concern into action. I have got a long way to go on writing. Your concerns will help me to improve. thank you so much.

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Riritsut_Kanarai
Riritsut_KanaraiLv3Riritsut_Kanarai

Thx for replying mr.author. 😂 And I didn't say your writing is suck. what I mean is some time we can't follow what you describing in your story. I commented about it in comment section. Keep writing don't stop. Your book is one of the book that I read that give me wild imagination. 😍.

Neorealist:Thank you for the review. I will be sure to put your concern into action. I have got a long way to go on writing. Your concerns will help me to improve. thank you so much.
3yr
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