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Neorealist
NeorealistAuthor3yrNeorealist

Shameless author here! Hello! Hope you're having a good day reading my novel! This is my first novel, but please, don't go easy on me. The only way to improve my writing and for you to enjoy my novel is to send me a feedback! Be it a good or harsh one. But I'm going to be shameless here, again. Throw in some stones, vote, send this to your library, send gifts, and everything in your power for this novel to improve a lot! So? Hit those subscribe button , like, and follow me on...wait wrong platform! Hit those 5 star buttons! And ride with me to the top! Also...try to comment, so that I'll know what are your thoughts guys! Do it on paragraph comments too! That way this novel will become interactive! Always, have a good day, a cup of hot coffee - or chocolate, when reading. Thanks again guys!

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Becoming Legend

Neorealist

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Neorealist
NeorealistAuthorNeorealist

Hello 265-dono. your comment is very heartwarming. seriously. I rarely get this kind of replies and now I know because it's worthit. first of all, I'm sorry for giving you a somewhat far from mediocre writings. This is story is my first try on writing so most of it (from 1 to at least 200ish) my writing is very bad. VERY BAD. If I have all the time i would love it to be rewritten. I just don't. the story, is compelling (not being biased since I'm the author (insert grin)), but my writing sucks last year, even now I'm still learning but I believe I have improved. but still, thank you much for giving the time to write a commen. I may not know who you really are, but you are a one kind soul. have a good day Mr/Ms.ish 265. 😁😁😁

Daoist917265:Hi Author, It's okay if you listen to the opinions of the reader, but don't take all of it into heart. Some readers are inexperienced as well, while some are just edgelords. It would be better if you just create a story that you would like to write, where we can see your character. I would rather read an original novel where the author gives life to the characters and the plot, be it in romance or adventure or action...than characters without a "soul" just so you can please the readers. Writing first and foremost is a passion, and what would that passion be without the essence of the author in it? All the best, Author-nim![img=recommend]
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

Will this have harem?

Neorealist
NeorealistAuthorNeorealist

as of now all i can say is "In Between." but not a total Harem.

Nikhil_Chand:Will this have harem?
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

ummmmm.... either it is a harem or it is not!!

Neorealist:as of now all i can say is "In Between." but not a total Harem.
Neorealist
NeorealistAuthorNeorealist

Haha, It's in between, not a total harem, but in between. A girl or two. ;)

Nikhil_Chand:ummmmm.... either it is a harem or it is not!!
ErjasD
ErjasDLv13ErjasD

So this will have romance and no dense mc? Pls answer or I will not read it!🧐

Neorealist
NeorealistAuthorNeorealist

Romance? A bit? But dense MC? No uh. My characters have a life of their own.

ErjasD:So this will have romance and no dense mc? Pls answer or I will not read it!🧐
SupremeLank29
SupremeLank29Lv3SupremeLank29

Small/tiny harem?

Neorealist:Haha, It's in between, not a total harem, but in between. A girl or two. ;)
SolitaryWolf
SolitaryWolfLv4SolitaryWolf

Well, I hope you will add more harem in the future

Neorealist:Haha, It's in between, not a total harem, but in between. A girl or two. ;)
Medoshi_Senpai
Medoshi_SenpaiLv4Medoshi_Senpai

TBH, I don't care if there's no harem. but if there's romance in it, imma read it regardless

Necsys_Coldheart
Necsys_ColdheartLv15Necsys_Coldheart

Im getting necromancer vibes and while i like them they are becoming a bit over used so ill read it if not but i might delay reading it if so

DriftingDragon
DriftingDragonLv13DriftingDragon

You can tell the author is a person of culture... yes...yes

Neorealist:Haha, It's in between, not a total harem, but in between. A girl or two. ;)
Rio_2006
Rio_2006Lv2Rio_2006

OK

UndeadProgenitor
UndeadProgenitorLv13UndeadProgenitor

Author is the mc the kind of hollow from bleach ???

Meds
MedsLv3Meds

dont add romance if its half ass

Neorealist
NeorealistAuthorNeorealist

I don't. yet. 😅

Meds:dont add romance if its half ass
KeazL_
KeazL_Lv12KeazL_

No

SolitaryWolf:Well, I hope you will add more harem in the future
Chicken_gravy
Chicken_gravyLv3Chicken_gravy

thanks author if u keep little to no romance I am all in coz romance is cliche and soft.... and I hate romance

Neorealist:Romance? A bit? But dense MC? No uh. My characters have a life of their own.
Daoist917265
Daoist917265Lv1Daoist917265

Hi Author, It's okay if you listen to the opinions of the reader, but don't take all of it into heart. Some readers are inexperienced as well, while some are just edgelords. It would be better if you just create a story that you would like to write, where we can see your character. I would rather read an original novel where the author gives life to the characters and the plot, be it in romance or adventure or action...than characters without a "soul" just so you can please the readers. Writing first and foremost is a passion, and what would that passion be without the essence of the author in it? All the best, Author-nim![img=recommend]