Review Detail of Jay_Blu in After Life: Demon Knights

Based on reading the first chapter, I can tell that the plot moving forward will be very interesting, especially if you're into fantasy. Its also cool to see that we both have very similar novels; Teenager dies and gets reborn into another world, angels and demons, etc. The only slight drawback to your novel is your English, but that shouldn't hold you back from your book's potential at all.