Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in After Life: Demon Knights

The story was nice! another reincarnation novel! This novel still has room for improvements. There were obvious grammatical errors and typos but don't worry! It was like me when I start! I can only say that either nitpick the typos or hire an editor....you will grow as you have one...well the editor will suggest for the betterment of the novel and your writing style will also improve when the editor will guide you like a mentor....all in all your work has potential when edited! Kudos!