Your story has that fine and dandy vibe on it. Although I got a bit lost in the first chapter, maybe because of the long paragraph and dialogues are chunk instead of separating it. But other than that, I find your character amusing and the setting very alluring. I hope you write for more author! Great job! Keeo up the good work.
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