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It is a good book I'd recommend you read it no reason not to what are you still doing here start reading and if you like it don't forget to leave a review it won't cost you anything

Really.Like did he had to believe everything,the guy says,and how come mc is controlled like this,this plot is too forced,novel lack depth. In short:popcorn novel,good to read if ur bored,and got nothing else.Congratz to author for his good job(for webnovel) ,which is better than 99% of Wn originals and fanfics.

The plot is a bit rushed, and he levels a lot faster than id like, but the author balances this by drastically increasing the level or other beings making him alot less OP, good class system and level system as well If you read and like chrysalis, you'll like this novel, quite surprised by how few views this story has

Good story. I hope he can use his powers more thoughtfully, maybe you can look at the power (ice, fire, darkness ..) usage of some anime characters.

Enjoyable story so far(I don't know what else to say). Jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj

Great concept of a normal animal and magical abilities, the human aspect is very interesting in the fact of the character acts of horrific actions to survive in a magical unknown world while maintaining a human kindness of those that have not brought betrayal.

All stories have potential, however, whether it is theoretically good or bad is somewhere between execution and personal preference. To readers, I suggest you simply read the story and formulate your own opinion on the story and what you want to do. To those who care here is the Bitter Cup It starts at chapter one and persists thereafter to quote "huh? where am I?" You can't presume all readers to have an interest in the thoughts of a character they do not yet know and probably won't ever know the way they should Worldbuilding, since the story takes place in the first person we are seeing the world through his eyes. Describe, shortly, what he is seeing. It doesn't have to be very complex it just has to be there. I'd suggest you simply read your own story and improve on your own chapters. However, readers can only give suggestions the author writes the story. A good story for those who like this stuff.

This is a really well written book. The updates are consistent and the author listens to your requests to make the story better and to add on to it. I would definitely recommend this novel. The character development and world building is actually pretty good. You can see the author improving as the story goes on and the descriptions on things; how the character looks and how the world around them looks. Really well balanced story and definitely would get a solid 4.4/5.