Review Detail of JustTakeMeHome in The Untamed Black Jade

The book has a lot of potential. It can be a very good book if the author would just fix the grammar. It's not very LGBT+ so i think the author should change the theme. It was a bit hard to keep up with the story as I didn't understand much but after trying to figure it out, the plot is pretty good. If the author hires a editor or a translater, i think the story can be even better. Good job anyways, Author!