I am not good at grammar, but the writing looks good. The chapter updates are incredibly fast. much better story than "Reliving the Past ~ Mage of the Abyss". incredible characters. most exploited World Background. personal criticism: The story starts just like the one in "Reliving the Past ~ Mage of the Abyss", but the part of chapter 14 takes a completely different direction and that was incredible because it improved an already very good story. the author of this story is really incredible.
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