Review Detail of RenuKakkar in 《《gone》》

I read all the 9 chapters that have been published. The story is interesting and different. It is developing well. The character design and the world background are well done. The stability of updates can not be assessed at present as only 9 chapters have been published. The writing need to be taken care off. It is not only the spelling mistakes but the punctuation that needs to be seen. The use of inverted commas, the full stop and commas are important. Please keep your paragraphs small as most read the novels from their mobiles and prefer shorter paragraphs. All the best, Author.