Review Detail of winterdaisy55 in 《《gone》》

Okay so first thing first, I really like the plot of the story. It's pretty intriguing. The only thing you need to work on is the use of punctuation. When I was reading, I saw some dialogues that are still missing the right punctuation. For me, punctuation is actually very important when it comes to writing, as it what makes things easier to read. If you can fix this little errors, I think you will write a better story as yours has huge potential to it. Keep on writing! Great job!