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The cover art looked nice so i gave it a chance... Decent read nothing particularly bad or good enough to keep me hooked so i didn't go any further that chapter 52. That being said... My Rant: The MC- This guy is somewhat disappointing IMO, other people might be fine with it but it just annoys me, at the beginning he goes to the village after using the excuse of monster attack. The people believe him because there really are monster attacks but then he proceeds to go out without a weapon to defend himself on the very same day? SP - These are super important to his growth and he only gets them when he levels, assuming it gets harder to level up the higher his level goes why would you waste it on simple mana replenishment? As a adventurer he should have at least secured potions that can replenish mana! Guild Master Rosie - I don't remember if i spelled her name right but in the first 50 chapters shes the only guild master that's been mentioned, It would have been good if the Author made it that she has some special Aura that causes people to become attracted her or something but the MC seems to lose all sense of reality in front of her 'Beauty' and he so far seems to be the only one. Romance - That chick in his group that suddenly fell in love with him just feels extremely out of place...i mean they knew each other for a few days if i remember correctly so it seems just too rushed. Should have waited for at least a few more interactions between them with a possible backstory (Tragic one maybe?). His few weeks training - This guy only learned two skills? I get it he was raising his archery mastery and how to survive and fight with other weapons but i mean he only learned shock arrow which i'm assuming came from his master and then he created his own skill...but hear me out real quick...he has a system that allows him to master stuff easily so how the hell did he only get one skill from his master unless this entire time he just wasn't using them which would be even worse.

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Life In Another World

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Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzAuthorBlack_Rabbit_Oz

Thanks for the informative review, it helped me a lot; I mean literally. I'm currently revising chapter 1 to 40, that being said. I didn't upload it here, due to the conflict that may arise, hm, about Alina fall in love to the MC truthfully, I guess I went too far cause what I wanted to happen is just her curiosity grow cause that reason would be crucial for my another minor arc. About the Master, the fault lies for my story lack of essential details, and I didn't emphasize what should be. Because his first training as his master didn't really teach him some archeries skill. Only tested his limit and capabilities. What he learned was to create his own art of archery. Well, thank you for your honest review! ❤️️

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Black_Rabbit_OzAuthorBlack_Rabbit_Oz

What I mean I didn't upload is, I didn't post it here yet, due to more confusion may arise.