Review Detail of OrionLux in Life In Another World
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Language translation issues continue with this chapter as well. While it does not render the chapter illegible it does make the flow suffer. This ultimately detracts from the story because english readers have to constantly think "what did the author mean here".
Life In Another World
Black_Rabbit_Oz
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Thank you for reading my work! ❤️ I re-read my latest chapter and yup, I agree with you in that, but don't worry I'll fix and revise all my chapters, it just that I don't have the time to do heavy editing, due to my workload that keeps filling up like a mountain. Sorry for the trouble, and I hope you enjoyed my story thus far. I really appreciate it.