Review Detail of TomGutshall in The Curse Of Wardoks

First the flaws, and then the good stuff. Your writing style isn't very descriptive. Most of the scenes are either action or dialogue oriented. This makes it a bit difficult to tell what's going on. This can work if executed well, but I think a bit of well written exposition would serve your story well. Most of your grammar is fine, but there are some places where I can't even tell what you're trying to say. The story itself is captivating. Each chapter was a complete 360 in tone. The narrative drives forward really quite well, and I think the the overused "aliens who have come to take over the earth" trope is actually done quite well here. Kudos!