I can only say one thing... Where are the other chapters??! Let me in! Let me iiiinnnnnnn!!! Jokes aside, this novel has a very interesting plot and seemed-to-be worldbuilding. I immediately got hooked on the mystery and that painful cliffhanger on the first chapter is already more than enough to make me want to know more. You excelled on the thriller and it was good enough to make me go to the edge of my seat. Other than some gramatical errors, I can't see any problem on the quality of the writing. I'm looking forward to more chapters!
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