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MatchaMilk
MatchaMilkLv44yr
2020-06-04 15:59

There are only a few chapters out but its got so much potential and draws you in immediately! Even just from the beginning of the first chapter we get the atmosphere of the story and the world we are in and it hooked me immediately. Although, I do have to say that it lost me halfway in the first chapter because the dialogue felt expositional and some of the things the author couldve benefited from showing through actions or slowly revealing throughout the story to keep the reader tense. The writing style is very good and I especially like how every chapter starts. Tho just another small thing, I think it'd be better if author checks the punctuations and doesnt forget to capitalise after a full stop. Anyways very great story!! Love it!!

The Curse Of Wardoks

Blank_thought
4.8
15 Chs

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Blank_thought
Blank_thoughtAuthor

Fewer dialogues, more narration, got it!

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JS_C
JS_CLv3

Truth be told, I don't give any novel a 5, especially if it's from the first chapter. But my god. This one just captures you in, I have never seen such a well-written grammar and story-wise first chapter like this. Dialogue, description and even the characters that we didn't even get to know are all amazing. My one and only complaint about this beautifully crafted story from the first chapter is that it only had one chapter. I seriously need more.

4yr

Blank_thought
Blank_thoughtAuthor

Hello, this is me the author giving myself a shameful 5 stars rating. Well, you know what they say, if you don't 5star your novel, how do you expect people to 5star it for you? Anyway, this is no time for jokes! I want to tell you all that my novel The Curse Of Wardoks has been nominated as the winner of the Silver Tiers of the WPC#118. Thanks to all of you! And this means that I have been offered to sign a contract with Webnovel. After a long time of thinking, I think I'm going to see it through, I'm just working on a new cover and some other novel stuff. I wish that this novel makes it to the top, I've been working on it for quite sometimes, and I have high hope for it. If you Sir, the one reading this review, still haven't read my novel, then what are you waiting for? If you did, I wish that you support me if you had enjoyed it. Creation is hard! So keep me going ^^ Thanks to everyone who read the novel so far!

4yr
Brahim_El_Mandoubi
Brahim_El_MandoubiLv1

Reveal spoiler

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_Tesla
_TeslaLv4

I really loved this story, minus the fact that there aren't more chapters anyways. It felt like I was being pulled into the world. beautiful writing skills and an amazing plot.

4yr
prada_murthy
prada_murthyLv13

This book is a gem. I fell in love with it one the first read. Your writing skills are amazing and the story is just mindblowing. The quality of writing is brilliant. It is evident how much effort the author has put into creating the story and the characters. Eager to see how the story proceeds. An awesome book and definitely a must-read. Keep up the good work author.

4yr
Oussama_Oub
Oussama_OubLv1

I like the development of the series and events in the story, besides the of way of writing makes it very easy and amusing to read. Nice Work!

4yr
Jhema
JhemaLv2

I'm loving this, especially the intro... Really got me with 'the end'. I also love how the story develops too. And am sure I'll love the MC. Good stuff!

4yr
call_me_conan
call_me_conanLv1

The very first novel I ever read here, and OMG it was so good! I don't have any experience in writing, but I can tell that this is a fantasitic novel! update the next chapters please!

4yr
enthu_reader
enthu_readerLv14

Wow what a powerful beginning! ❤️ The mystery of the deaths of 13 million people only in 20 mins is enough to hook the readers to want more. Even though it's only 3 chapters, this story has a lot of potential. Writing quality is very good 👍 I ask other readers too to do give it a try. Keep it up Author!

4yr
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