Review Detail of Arunavazael in Reincarnating into a chinese novel.
Review detail
I've read the original novel and it's good enough. But this fanfict far from the original. Let's just leave it at that. Now there is list things that made me rate this Fanfic badly. 1. Writing Quality is bad. Leave the grammar aside, The use of wrong capital letter for name, Typo , weird conversation writing style that make you confused and dizzy. 2. The characters is shallow, they suddenly popup from no where and leave it at the background. Even If I already read the original but I can't always remember all side character. 3. The story is rushed , many plot skipped , leaving many blank hole in story. This story created as if the reader expected to know the event that were skipped. 4. World background is blurry.
Reincarnating into a chinese novel.
Etiger789
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Cant do much about the quality since im not a professional😐😐😐. As for capital letters, I'll see to those later but I write and ask for any mistakes I've written but I've never seen you comment SOOOOOO. Mhh, but as for your second, point your right about that, but what can I do when people haven't read the original. I can't force them to go and read it😑😑😑. And as for the world background, it's basically an alternate reality of earth. Just like every earth fiction based novel😶😶😶. Only a 2 weeks have based by in that world so of course there won't be much info on it but I'm pretty sure I've given a bit of info alredy. As for your third point, I agree I do skip convos a lot. I'll improve on that🤔🤔🤔.
I just finish reading this novel several hours ago. I'm to lazy to point out all the mistake since the mistake is everywhere. So my suggestion is edit all of it from the start. Especially on conversation. Don't use Gu Ning " ,,,,,,,,,,,, " said Gu Ning . If you use Gu Ning " ....." that it . But it would be better to use "............" said Gu Ning or the like since we're accustomed to.
Etiger789:Cant do much about the quality since im not a professional😐😐😐. As for capital letters, I'll see to those later but I write and ask for any mistakes I've written but I've never seen you comment SOOOOOO. Mhh, but as for your second, point your right about that, but what can I do when people haven't read the original. I can't force them to go and read it😑😑😑. And as for the world background, it's basically an alternate reality of earth. Just like every earth fiction based novel😶😶😶. Only a 2 weeks have based by in that world so of course there won't be much info on it but I'm pretty sure I've given a bit of info alredy. As for your third point, I agree I do skip convos a lot. I'll improve on that🤔🤔🤔.