Mk. We are on the 7th chapter so, imma leave my first impression so far. Writing quality. It's improved a lot more and the story doesn't just go flat; Stability of updates: It's good so far, 7 chapters in I think about 1 week. Another thing, the chapters are pretty good length I'd say, maybe try to have a goal of 3K if not already. Suggestions: Do not make this a Harem for the love of God, Add some more references yeah, GJ (can i put my balls in yo jaws)
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