The character switch are greatly done. I think lots of people who try to do that fail most of the time, but you do well so far. That pace is correct, your novel actually reminded me about Riverdale TV series and so I was right haha. The synopsis is perfect too. I don't have anything negative to say lol. You know how to express your thoughts - You know how to write :)
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