Review Detail of NotUse in The 4 O' Clock Club

Greetings to the author! I am currently in chapter seven and the story development seems to have a perfect pace. (It's not fast nor is it slow! good job) The writing quality is perfect, there are no errors when it comes to vocabulary and spelling. As for the characters, they seem to be described in an astounding way. The author does a good job when it comes to descriptions since they are vivid. When it comes to the world background I have nothing to complain about since it is truly genuine. Right, I almost forget to say, your dialogues are impressive and genuine by the way. Keep up the goodwork and don't forget to stay healthy :) This review is brought to you by: Snom! The cutest Pokemon in the whole world.