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Review Detail of Zeyziel in Perverted Cultivation

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Zeyziel
ZeyzielLv143yrZeyziel

Your story premise is fine, world building and character development are okay except the main character. For someone who is super smart and a doctor he acts like a f*cking moron. I get his desire to be doctor n such but he doesn't seem to be adapting or more like he is deluding himself and be willfully ignorant, it makes it hard to read the story. And what happened in the cube with the girl, the cube gave him info about what he could do to d girl n d potential negative effects 4 her and being a doctor he still couldn't get himself under control... I mean seriously?! With all d harping he's done about his dream of being a doctor n d reason he gave why, one would think he would have more self control...smh. Anyways good story but cos of d mc I doubt I'll be able to continue reading

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Perverted Cultivation

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NoShi_KaRu
NoShi_KaRuLv2NoShi_KaRu

I don't like mc.....he's like a idiot

CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2CriticalReader

i'm no longer surprised, there are too many stupid mcs on this site ''you cannot write a character smarter than you''