Review Detail of ReadingFiend in Unsealing Emptiness

I’ve read the first 75 chapters so far and find the story interesting. The writing while not the best keeps you interested in the story and each chapter is better than the last. The transitions between the point of view (POV) don’t flow smoothly especially at the beginning however the tone is consistent. The chapters are at a decent length (aka not too short). I added the story to my library as i am looking forward to how the story progresses and improves. Theres not a lot of world developement in the 1st 75 chapters but there is character development for 2 of the characters. Some of the development of the main character could have been explained more before the multiple time jumps.