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The novel is epic, but the reason for the low stars is cause **** has already happened, meaning, as of now, the SI MC is already an vice admiral [he is youngest VD, dope], but nothing is shown about how he became a VD, or his early experiences in the OP world...same thing with relationships, no build is shown. The FF just starts off in the middle and continues, that said, dosnt mean book is ****, or that u want understand anything, what I am saying is that there no CD or SD, no world exploration, MC adventures in the past, how he meet is lovers, and how they built the relationship, how MC created a parental bond with ssengoku and those at the top, non of it is shown. Still, its fun to read
NOTHING (III)
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Funny you asked man I though i would make his past into flashbacks to explain things slowly . Meaning i will write until somewhere and then do a flashback to show something about his past . That would cost at least 4-5 flashbacks to show what is important about mc (example where did he came from, the place and when he meet his lovers, some of his adventures and how did ge behave in his childhood) . . . .
Lunarian_King:Funny you asked man I though i would make his past into flashbacks to explain things slowly . Meaning i will write until somewhere and then do a flashback to show something about his past . That would cost at least 4-5 flashbacks to show what is important about mc (example where did he came from, the place and when he meet his lovers, some of his adventures and how did ge behave in his childhood) . . . .