Review Detail of amaturewriter in Fenrir the Father of Wolves
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Dope english, dope plot, dope structure, dope idea, dope style, dope cuteness, weird human dog...half dope.. do note that MC is a dog, like he is a dog and is kinda submissive....read chp 4......just imagine any anime scene with a god like animal that becomes submissive to a chick,,,its what happens here,,,a god like being that is submissive,,,nothing wrong, maybe a bit weird, and strange,,,considering he is a god of chaos and destruction,,,,kinda fucks up ur vision of a being like that,,but eh...........stories interesting
Fenrir the Father of Wolves
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He will change as the story progresses, as of now he’s just chilling and kinda enjoying his life. He feels protective of Mavis, like she’s part of his pack, like she belongs to him. But he’s still childish and behaves like a pup. He will always care for Mavis, but the more the story progresses the more his personality will change and adapt.
he is an *****, he is fernir, a GOD of chaos and the destroyer of worlds....I see this first... but then looking at his actions, he is a dog,,,,what u are telling me.I get it... BUT the way I see it is that MC is a dog,,,,and the reason I think this is stupid is cause of what the MC is, and what he represents....but throughout the entire story he is a dog....a submissive MC........and I think its stupid and retarded.... **: do note that even though I think that the MC is retarded and stupid, I still enjoy the story, and am somewhat of a fan....just...it puts me off to see a god behave like a dog....
LOGICAL:He will change as the story progresses, as of now he’s just chilling and kinda enjoying his life. He feels protective of Mavis, like she’s part of his pack, like she belongs to him. But he’s still childish and behaves like a pup. He will always care for Mavis, but the more the story progresses the more his personality will change and adapt.
He is a pup in God years. His full size will be around 90km tall, and he's about 30-40 feet tall right now. This behaviour is him as a pup when he gets off his pup years that are longer to his godly biology; his personality will change; he will still care about Mavis but in a different way.
amaturewriter:he is an *****, he is fernir, a GOD of chaos and the destroyer of worlds....I see this first... but then looking at his actions, he is a dog,,,,what u are telling me.I get it... BUT the way I see it is that MC is a dog,,,,and the reason I think this is stupid is cause of what the MC is, and what he represents....but throughout the entire story he is a dog....a submissive MC........and I think its stupid and retarded.... **: do note that even though I think that the MC is retarded and stupid, I still enjoy the story, and am somewhat of a fan....just...it puts me off to see a god behave like a dog....
The system warned him about his age affecting his intellect, and that's why he behaves like an idiot and sometimes submissive. In standard dog time, he's barely 4-5 months old. So in about 100 years, he will have reached his full size, and finally maturity. Like as teenagers, we can't control hormones he's going through the wolf equivalent, so stay tuned, because eventually, he will be the God those out of his pack fear. And inside too.
amaturewriter:he is an *****, he is fernir, a GOD of chaos and the destroyer of worlds....I see this first... but then looking at his actions, he is a dog,,,,what u are telling me.I get it... BUT the way I see it is that MC is a dog,,,,and the reason I think this is stupid is cause of what the MC is, and what he represents....but throughout the entire story he is a dog....a submissive MC........and I think its stupid and retarded.... **: do note that even though I think that the MC is retarded and stupid, I still enjoy the story, and am somewhat of a fan....just...it puts me off to see a god behave like a dog....
again bro.....I dont really care about it,,,,,the stories interesting, I said it before, and I get what u mean..about the MC........ BUT again try to understand what I mean.........age or not, MC was ***** [yes you've give reason to MC personality...and I accept them].... BUT at the end of the day, all I see is That MC is a GOD,,A DESTROYER OF WORLDS,,,and an ADULT [plus even though u say he has a regressed mind, so far he behaved like an *****]...... .so, with all this titles....I just see it retarded to see MC behave like a dog............this is similar to seeing an SI in dxd, with the powers of gilgamesh joining a peerage.....its stupid and annoying, its like a beta MC [not the alpha type **** manner BUT in the sense that a god is a servant, a dog]. .........is it bad in the book....no, its fine,,,hell people seem to love,,so nothing wrong,,,,,,,,, ,but for me, MC is a dog,,,,,not a god [see that...GOD----DOG,,,get the joke?]......like the latest chp where mavis tell MC to stop......I cant help but imagine an owner telling its dog to stay....its stupid to see a god behave like that..... ,get what I mean? no matter what u do later, MC was a dog,,,and once a dog, always a dog,,,and this is stupid cause MC is GOD....
LOGICAL:The system warned him about his age affecting his intellect, and that's why he behaves like an idiot and sometimes submissive. In standard dog time, he's barely 4-5 months old. So in about 100 years, he will have reached his full size, and finally maturity. Like as teenagers, we can't control hormones he's going through the wolf equivalent, so stay tuned, because eventually, he will be the God those out of his pack fear. And inside too.
He will change, eventually as of now he is a baby, he will eventually be the wolf you think he is. Believe in him #letsbelieveinFenrir :p
amaturewriter:again bro.....I dont really care about it,,,,,the stories interesting, I said it before, and I get what u mean..about the MC........ BUT again try to understand what I mean.........age or not, MC was ***** [yes you've give reason to MC personality...and I accept them].... BUT at the end of the day, all I see is That MC is a GOD,,A DESTROYER OF WORLDS,,,and an ADULT [plus even though u say he has a regressed mind, so far he behaved like an *****]...... .so, with all this titles....I just see it retarded to see MC behave like a dog............this is similar to seeing an SI in dxd, with the powers of gilgamesh joining a peerage.....its stupid and annoying, its like a beta MC [not the alpha type **** manner BUT in the sense that a god is a servant, a dog]. .........is it bad in the book....no, its fine,,,hell people seem to love,,so nothing wrong,,,,,,,,, ,but for me, MC is a dog,,,,,not a god [see that...GOD----DOG,,,get the joke?]......like the latest chp where mavis tell MC to stop......I cant help but imagine an owner telling its dog to stay....its stupid to see a god behave like that..... ,get what I mean? no matter what u do later, MC was a dog,,,and once a dog, always a dog,,,and this is stupid cause MC is GOD....
And I get it, I get yo ur point I wrote it with the intention of him growing from pup sweet and kind to smart and unbeatable. Like a character arc to say the least,
amaturewriter:again bro.....I dont really care about it,,,,,the stories interesting, I said it before, and I get what u mean..about the MC........ BUT again try to understand what I mean.........age or not, MC was ***** [yes you've give reason to MC personality...and I accept them].... BUT at the end of the day, all I see is That MC is a GOD,,A DESTROYER OF WORLDS,,,and an ADULT [plus even though u say he has a regressed mind, so far he behaved like an *****]...... .so, with all this titles....I just see it retarded to see MC behave like a dog............this is similar to seeing an SI in dxd, with the powers of gilgamesh joining a peerage.....its stupid and annoying, its like a beta MC [not the alpha type **** manner BUT in the sense that a god is a servant, a dog]. .........is it bad in the book....no, its fine,,,hell people seem to love,,so nothing wrong,,,,,,,,, ,but for me, MC is a dog,,,,,not a god [see that...GOD----DOG,,,get the joke?]......like the latest chp where mavis tell MC to stop......I cant help but imagine an owner telling its dog to stay....its stupid to see a god behave like that..... ,get what I mean? no matter what u do later, MC was a dog,,,and once a dog, always a dog,,,and this is stupid cause MC is GOD....
nah....this boook inst my taste, I hate submissive MC when they have godlike powers or are gods [if they didnt, then its fine but if they do,,,,its insulting],,,,,,,,, but here is a suggestion: UR other book,,,I was a fan......enjoyed it very much..but u know it kinda got ruined [for me atleast], and it was the relationships that ruined it,, like the relationships with the princess and irene,,,,it all seemed forced and, it seemed like the chicks only liked MC cause he was OP,,,they were useless, they did nothing for him, nothing..., Plus there was no build up, no relationship moments nothing, both of em seemed like gold diggers,, it would've been better if MC went alone and hid his power, and explored the ancient world and its powers instead of flaunting it...As the entire relationship between irene seemed forced......like she behaved around him as if she'd known him for months, whilst in realtity it wasnt even a week....****ty CD there,,,,[ And yes, I do know that she thought MC was strong as her, BUT even then, it was forced, and sh didnt do anything for him] ,,,,,so yah....try to build the relationships here,,,,eitherway I am out, I just suggested cause the lack of relationship build was what ruined ur other book for me,,,,,,,,,, ur stories [other than the relationship moments in the first book and the submissive god] are all DOPE...but sadly for me, its not my taste,,,,still for what its worth, I enjoyed em, especially in ur first book when MC created the empire, it was really cool But the **** I mentioned above made me quit .....anyway, as they say in Norse...Adios Amigo
LOGICAL:And I get it, I get yo ur point I wrote it with the intention of him growing from pup sweet and kind to smart and unbeatable. Like a character arc to say the least,
I also don't like submissive MC but first, he was reincarnated as a pup a God but still a pup in which he hadn't had access to his powers and was still learning. Also, you may not like that as a God he was submissive but he is not a ”God” mentally and won't just act all mighty right in the beginning. It's like a loser no money, popularity, etc just has nothing. Reborn a second after dying to become the ”cool guy” lol expecting him to become some badass out of nowhere just because he is in the body of jock let's say. Author is building character. Like yes, he's a God but that's only physically, I don't know his age before reincarnating but it's been explained something with his mental faculties being altered to that of a newborn pup because of hormones? So it's nothing to be surprised by. People like it cause they understand these facts. I'm not sure if you're still reading but if you stopped you should give it go again. But I do understand where your coming from as I reiterate I do not like submissive mc but understand if you don't.
amaturewriter:nah....this boook inst my taste, I hate submissive MC when they have godlike powers or are gods [if they didnt, then its fine but if they do,,,,its insulting],,,,,,,,, but here is a suggestion: UR other book,,,I was a fan......enjoyed it very much..but u know it kinda got ruined [for me atleast], and it was the relationships that ruined it,, like the relationships with the princess and irene,,,,it all seemed forced and, it seemed like the chicks only liked MC cause he was OP,,,they were useless, they did nothing for him, nothing..., Plus there was no build up, no relationship moments nothing, both of em seemed like gold diggers,, it would've been better if MC went alone and hid his power, and explored the ancient world and its powers instead of flaunting it...As the entire relationship between irene seemed forced......like she behaved around him as if she'd known him for months, whilst in realtity it wasnt even a week....****ty CD there,,,,[ And yes, I do know that she thought MC was strong as her, BUT even then, it was forced, and sh didnt do anything for him] ,,,,,so yah....try to build the relationships here,,,,eitherway I am out, I just suggested cause the lack of relationship build was what ruined ur other book for me,,,,,,,,,, ur stories [other than the relationship moments in the first book and the submissive god] are all DOPE...but sadly for me, its not my taste,,,,still for what its worth, I enjoyed em, especially in ur first book when MC created the empire, it was really cool But the **** I mentioned above made me quit .....anyway, as they say in Norse...Adios Amigo
I also don't like submissive MC but first, he was reincarnated as a pup a God but still a pup in which he hadn't had access to his powers and was still learning. Also, you may not like that as a God he was submissive but he is not a ”God” mentally and won't just act all mighty right in the beginning. It's like a loser no money, popularity, etc just has nothing. Reborn a second after dying to become the ”cool guy” lol expecting him to become some badass out of nowhere just because he is in the body of jock let's say. Author is building character. Like yes, he's a God but that's only physically, I don't know his age before reincarnating but it's been explained something with his mental faculties being altered to that of a newborn pup because of hormones? So it's nothing to be surprised by. People like it cause they understand these facts. I'm not sure if you're still reading but if you stopped you should give it go again. But I do understand where your coming from as I reiterate I do not like submissive mc but understand if you don't.
amaturewriter:nah....this boook inst my taste, I hate submissive MC when they have godlike powers or are gods [if they didnt, then its fine but if they do,,,,its insulting],,,,,,,,, but here is a suggestion: UR other book,,,I was a fan......enjoyed it very much..but u know it kinda got ruined [for me atleast], and it was the relationships that ruined it,, like the relationships with the princess and irene,,,,it all seemed forced and, it seemed like the chicks only liked MC cause he was OP,,,they were useless, they did nothing for him, nothing..., Plus there was no build up, no relationship moments nothing, both of em seemed like gold diggers,, it would've been better if MC went alone and hid his power, and explored the ancient world and its powers instead of flaunting it...As the entire relationship between irene seemed forced......like she behaved around him as if she'd known him for months, whilst in realtity it wasnt even a week....****ty CD there,,,,[ And yes, I do know that she thought MC was strong as her, BUT even then, it was forced, and sh didnt do anything for him] ,,,,,so yah....try to build the relationships here,,,,eitherway I am out, I just suggested cause the lack of relationship build was what ruined ur other book for me,,,,,,,,,, ur stories [other than the relationship moments in the first book and the submissive god] are all DOPE...but sadly for me, its not my taste,,,,still for what its worth, I enjoyed em, especially in ur first book when MC created the empire, it was really cool But the **** I mentioned above made me quit .....anyway, as they say in Norse...Adios Amigo
Exactly why I am hesitant on reading this. Author mentioned making a novel about a godlike DOG and I knew something was up. Especially when people were asking to make the Mc A SUMMON. Godlike being is a dang PET, it’s disgraceful and ruins the mood to even read the story. But I do like the authors other ff
EvilWolf:It always happens with a animal mc they always become a pet or a slave 😪 and go around helping and saving humans annoys tf outta me
Novel name got me interested but as soon as I read he was a pup and a girl comes along...... you know what's gonna happen 😪
amaturewriter:Same bru,
Always get hyped up but then the cliches come and same with a the annoying girls 😪 makes me want to scream and punch a hole in my wall
amaturewriter:Same bru,