Review Detail of mrmrcia in Lily: The Lady in Flats

Oh dear, I'm shipping Lillian with Tristan now. However, somehow, I want her to be with Sol, damn it. Freak this. Maddie is still the hero here, for helping Lillian when she just started. ^^ If Alessandra had the time to spread rumours and pictures, she should've just spent those on improving herself. How petty, a very typical noble lady who got her pride smothered. Leave Lillian alone, ugh! Alexander better straighten up that sister of his. I adored reading your work because we have very similar writing styles. You take your time in describing the sceneries and the happenings all around Lillian. Rather than lacking in descriptions, it's better to read a wordy, but vivid detailing. If I may just say, save for her enthusiasm and reluctance to ignite more trouble, Lillian's character is quite bland? As the FML, I was just hoping for her propensities to be a tad unique. (Maybe it's just my preference, please don't hate me for saying this.) Just be careful with your incorrect verb tenses. I've noticed a lot of them. However, these mistakes are just a matter of editing. It doesn't affect your wonderful storytelling. Overall, with your moderate pacing which is the most optimal, your story is really engaging. Please be confident when I say that you're a good writer. I'll be cheering you on!