Review Detail of marchobanes_09 in Monstergirl Rancher (Currently undergoing Rewrite)

1.) As for the quality of the writing, I can only say it's okay... because of how the function of society in the story begins to form. 2.) for the story development part, man, you're in too much of a hurry for everything that has happened, from the beginning of the MC meeting with Liora to the auction. 3.) for character design, honestly what I hate the most is the MC personality design itself. because of your hasty development of the story you destroy the character where he only accepts the reality he thinks is comfortable like sex but doesn't want to accept the brutal reality like slavery even though he already knows it... this makes me wonder if he is a child or not adults who have experienced the brutality of modern society.