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ShadowsFinger
ShadowsFingerAuthor4yr
2020-05-27 05:00

Hello all, this is just my personal bias review for this new work. I had found that the VR Game genre could use a little bit more twists, and an added fantasy element to spice things up a bit as we have so many of the other ones around. I am doing this for fun, and also the Spirity Award Contest, and based on the results shown here I'll determine whether to push the series further, it will be a long story with a deep plot, very interesting character with their own back story and goals, along with a secret treasure as they main goal for all who chases their desires. Please do enjoy, and if you love it, support with a review of your own :)

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SEISHOKU_SHA108
SEISHOKU_SHA108Lv6

Romance? Harem? Yes or no

DioSDeLCaoS
DioSDeLCaoSLv10

haren?

ShadowsFinger
ShadowsFingerAuthor

Harem? Yes it is, I was thinking of writing a Harem for a change, I want to see how many support the idea though, otherwise I can keep it one person focused in the long run.

DioSDeLCaoS:haren?
ShadowsFinger
ShadowsFingerAuthor

Yes, Harem and Romance

SEISHOKU_SHA108:Romance? Harem? Yes or no
I_Am_Handsome
I_Am_HandsomeLv3

Hey author, just here to let you know that you wrote "scent" instead of "sent" on the synopsis.

ShadowsFinger
ShadowsFingerAuthor

Thanks, but sigh... I can't edit it, I guess I will have to be my universal typo

I_Am_Handsome:Hey author, just here to let you know that you wrote "scent" instead of "sent" on the synopsis.
Thesoultaker88
Thesoultaker88Lv5

Will mc love his harem members ? Asking before i start reading

ShadowsFinger
ShadowsFingerAuthor

Yes, he wont be like other emotionless MC when it comes to women, though the romance is the main focus ill try to keep it entertaining.

Thesoultaker88:Will mc love his harem members ? Asking before i start reading
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

Yo don’t sign a contract with Webnovel you officially lose rights to your novel I want you to keep the rights to it as I imagine this going big and getting a manga and a anime So that’s why I am warning you keep in mind it’s associated with China and qidian So if you want to start getting money from writing make a patrion Heck you could even try and contact raging golden eagle he’s making a comic called blade devil once he has finished it Mabie you can become partners

ShadowsFinger
ShadowsFingerAuthor

It's a pretty good suggession, but I already contracted this one. I still have others I'm writing on patreon though, I was looking for an artist to do my main series I am writing, let check and see if he's interested in my main series.

CliffkunLolRekt:Yo don’t sign a contract with Webnovel you officially lose rights to your novel I want you to keep the rights to it as I imagine this going big and getting a manga and a anime So that’s why I am warning you keep in mind it’s associated with China and qidian So if you want to start getting money from writing make a patrion Heck you could even try and contact raging golden eagle he’s making a comic called blade devil once he has finished it Mabie you can become partners
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

Is your main series a harem novel? Like this one I only read harem novels XD Tho I’m sad you already signed on this as that’s basically giving away your rights to the novel Sigh 😔

ShadowsFinger:It's a pretty good suggession, but I already contracted this one. I still have others I'm writing on patreon though, I was looking for an artist to do my main series I am writing, let check and see if he's interested in my main series.
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

These two links I’m sending you will basically tell you about Webnovels scummy behavior https://whatsawhizzerwebnovels.com/why-do-people-hate-qidian-webnovel/

ShadowsFinger:It's a pretty good suggession, but I already contracted this one. I still have others I'm writing on patreon though, I was looking for an artist to do my main series I am writing, let check and see if he's interested in my main series.
ShadowsFinger
ShadowsFingerAuthor

Yes, that novel is also a harem novel :) It's called Dual Sword God, and is on Amazon and Patreon, also, most of what the person said wasn't real though, check out what the author of Last Wish System wrote in contraction to the post, you will see more clearly.

CliffkunLolRekt:Is your main series a harem novel? Like this one I only read harem novels XD Tho I’m sad you already signed on this as that’s basically giving away your rights to the novel Sigh 😔
ScionOfDegeneracy
ScionOfDegeneracyLv4

This review makes me think, that there is high possibility of you dropping the series if it doesn't do that well.

ScionOfDegeneracy
ScionOfDegeneracyLv4

This review makes me think, that there is high possibility of you dropping the series if it doesn't do that well.

ScionOfDegeneracy
ScionOfDegeneracyLv4

Isn't it very easy to edit the synopsis. Just go to your works in webnovel, and at the info tab, change the synopsis

ShadowsFinger:Thanks, but sigh... I can't edit it, I guess I will have to be my universal typo
ScionOfDegeneracy
ScionOfDegeneracyLv4

Isn't it very easy to edit the synopsis. Just go to your works in webnovel, and at the info tab, change the synopsis

ShadowsFinger:Thanks, but sigh... I can't edit it, I guess I will have to be my universal typo
ShadowsFinger
ShadowsFingerAuthor

oh, it's not the synopsis but this review, you can't edit review have to delete and rewrite

ScionOfDegeneracy:Isn't it very easy to edit the synopsis. Just go to your works in webnovel, and at the info tab, change the synopsis
Sinful_blessings
Sinful_blessingsLv3

Love it :)

MrFalan
MrFalanLv14

Read till 78 still dont understand why let him live lika pig and go through that not teaching him anything while others started ahead useless saint mother just to be there

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