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Daoist_kanukai
Daoist_kanukaiLv143yr
2021-03-30 07:05

I read this up to chapter 60 something (the part where she cross dresses and meets deku) and I was enjoying it. I was liking how the story was going and didn't see myself stopping until it was completed. I could look past the occasional mistakes because my mind would already pronounce it correctly, so it didn't bother me. love the progression. you could see how she develops as a person as time goes on and all the friends she makes from being a loner. What I liked in particular was how the Chara? ended a potential antagonist before he even had the chance to do anything, just that alone secured my loyalty. Absolutely loved it. Until chapter 59 or somewhere around there. I personally felt the story was going great until she decided to let herself get bullied. like she for real was letting them lay into her so she wouldn't have to deal with crowds. And then proceeds to beat them up! like the entire chapter was useless because she changes schools again, but this time she cross dresses. Now normally, I wouldn't care about it. I mean occasionally i read BL, even though I dont have a preference for it, so my dislike for Akane dressing up as a guy doesn't stem from any homophobia or shit like that. And the story feels like it all over the place. It's probably just me, but I feel like some of the ideas in the story were hastily put together, which somehow doesn't detract from the story, because it's a great read. But I feel like it's getting repetitive. Beautiful this, famous that, dislike of crowds , get beat up. these are all recurring themes.. anyway, I highly recommend for some slightly-not so slightly light reading. Plus its completed so its pretty much smooth sailing until the end.

Strength of Will (A BNHA x Undertale FanFic)

HopelessHikikomori
4.7
116 Chs

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HopelessHikikomori
HopelessHikikomoriAuthor

yeah, that was weird to compress into one chapter, wasn't it? Anyways, I hope you are going to like the reboot, it's going to be different.

3yr
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Daoist_kanukai
Daoist_kanukaiLv14

I'll read it for sure!

HopelessHikikomori:yeah, that was weird to compress into one chapter, wasn't it? Anyways, I hope you are going to like the reboot, it's going to be different.
3yr
iwantyouinmyswamp
iwantyouinmyswampLv4

An actual review, how unusual. Usually all I see is d*ckheads that haven't read the story but instantly gave it either 5 or 1 stars. Thanks for actually being useful and using reviews as they were intended.

3yr
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Orthanos
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I never played Undertale... Well that will change tonight. I have never heard of a pacifist hero before. This will be interesting. This story reminds BNHA that you don't need a Quirk to be a hero. With c16 we can see ACTION. But i would rather focus on the Music. Either way, I love your main protaganist. MOE!!!!

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NaaaaaaaLv6

From my time of writing this the story is starting off at a descent pace and the author is doing a great job on updates and character building. There are a few spelling errors but they can be easily fixed so overall this is a great fanfic crossover and I am exited for improvements is storytelling cuz it will help keep some readers from being distracted by the errors and keep them invested in the story. Keep up the good work author and take care of urself cuz I’ve seen authors burnout in their writing. :)

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Just_Miyuki
Just_MiyukiLv6

I honestly didn't have High expectation with the Fanfic but the more i read the more Interested i am Reading but there still Confusing stuff and some Grammar mistake Overall its really good hope you Continue Good Luck!!

4yr
Menhera_chan
Menhera_chanLv4

Giving a Review to help you get rated? I haven't actually read anything of this novel yet, but it does seem interesting enough. I have it bookmarked! :3

4yr
Fastia
FastiaLv4

This book has an interesting story and I want to see where the author takes it. The characters are fleshed out well enough and there is still some mystery in the book that makes you want to keep reading.

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

To be honest it's a great book, but it's a shame to be a fanfic. Seeing the low presence of the canon in the book, I believe that the author could have done much better with an original work in a similar scenario. Changing the name of some characters this book would stop being a fanfic and become an original. As a fanfic i give this book 3 stars because i can't see the canon here at all, but seeing as an original i can give 5 stars so my final rating is 4 stars.

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jack_crafts
jack_craftsLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Ouroboros_Outings
Ouroboros_OutingsLv4

This is one of the best fan fictions on this platform

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Tirell_Agarson
Tirell_AgarsonLv4

okay. I am pretty familiar with this so..... First off: writing quality, I really couldn't have done it any better than you. so, congrats. 2nd: story development, there really isn't any more I can say, other than you did this fantastically. 3rd: character design, in this regard I can say that you have done better than some famous authors that I know of, and that says a lot. 4th: updating stability. I can't give a higher rating for this because I have not personally received an update. 5th: world background. fantastic, outstanding, breathtaking, superb, I can go on and on about how good your world background is and is not I have seen better I have read better but, the reason why you are getting the maximum rating for world background is that you gave enough background to the my hero academia world without giving away too many spoilers of the anime for those that have not seen it yet and still managed to set the stage. and I must say I am very very pleased with how the story turned out. lastly, do your best to take care of yourself in these troubled times don't overwork yourself either.

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