Review Detail of Nexus0o in Unchained Dragon (WoW Fanfic)

A very decent Warcraft story. No fast story progress, characters not very OP. It's rare to find Warcraft fanfic where the writer knows the plot and really love this world. But there are significant cons here. First, writing style is a very bad. I don't even mean grammar. Sentence building is just disgusting. The author is trying to fit a bunch of thoughts in one paragraph. We do this, we go there and then we get that... C'mon that's not just hard to read, but make a very good novel Second, MC powers. MC have a legacy and powers of every dragon kin, he is strong and bla-bla-bla, but he cant compare to female lead just because she is a super-duper genius, so he trying to activate his system so he can compare with her.... what the h*ck?? This sh**ty system spoils all logic and events. In each novel, if the author puts the system at the head of the plot, then this simply shows the author's cas*ration as a writer. I really hate all of that "system" shit in mostly fanfics.