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Tangent34
Tangent34Lv44yr
2020-06-04 22:43

Your writing skills are quite unique and the story development is smooth as well. Though I don't read martial arts genre books much, this novel has turned my views completely. Keep your hardwork! You are doing great!☺️

Her Master's Vengeance.

phantom6_sensei
4.6
16 Chs

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MatchaMilk
MatchaMilkLv4

When I read the synopsis I already knew this book was going to be great and it didnt disappoint me! I have to get it off my chest and say it again but chapter 2 by far is my fav! The writing style is simple but it has that flow to it that makes the readers feel emotional which adds this amazing feel to the story. The plot is also nice and well developed but I felt like at the beginning it was a bit too fast and I wish we wouldve gotten more info. The world building is nicely done, although there arent many chapters out yet but you can still get a feel for it and it draws you in. A novel worth reading and I recommend it to everyone who enjoy a good story with emotional beats!

4yr

Deji_Willoughby
Deji_WilloughbyLv1

The Good is very excellently written. Well done my boy. The sky is ur limit.. Shine on like the sky. The next book u wld write wld be about me when am leaving the Presidency. I promise you. Am sure you wlould win no doubt about it.

4yr
Qween_Amanda
Qween_AmandaLv1

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4yr
Daoist_Tunde70
Daoist_Tunde70Lv1

A nice read, It's really smooth and has a intriguing story This work is currently in a competition so please support the author by voting for it.

4yr
Awoo_Awoo
Awoo_AwooLv2

I honestly have a heart for this kind of stories. The first chapter was already intense, the second hits the emotion, and the story's progress is amazing. A story full of action, yes! Character depth, yes! There's a few punctuation errors, but overall, it has the potential! :)

4yr
Jay_Zee14
Jay_Zee14Lv1

The book is very interesting. I like the suspense. It's dope. You did a good job on the book. Well done. You are very talented. I can't wait for other chapters. Good job bro 🔥👌

4yr
obinna_kabiri
obinna_kabiriLv1

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4yr
Shyo
ShyoLv2

It was a really nice chapter, keep up the good work. Although before publishing, you check for any mistakes in grammar. Overall, it's a lovely book and has great potential.

4yr
Yemisi_Ajoke
Yemisi_AjokeLv1

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4yr
Alex_Tayo
Alex_TayoLv1

Good story line. The writer continually brought nature into his writing. There is still room for improvement on continuity. The plot is good and well detailed.

4yr
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