This is average at best, don't feel like listing the things that are wrong. But chapter 5 was triggering me, i mean about the System logs. What was this interaction? It was stupid af i mean he gets angry like a child and asks why the AI did not told him about that he "goes" unconscious, the AI tells him he should go to System logs, he ask how. The AI tells him like he is a Idiot for not knowing how to enter it, he should ask the System, "System enter System logs" then he did that. And finds that the System told him in the SYSTEM LOGS that he is going unconscious, then he apologizes for "his" mistake and the AI forgives him. 1. How should he know that this function exist? 2. He was supposed to make his body in 2 minutes, so how was he supposed to ask about the System functions while making his body? 3. How should he know how to enter System logs, i mean he just asked. They are many different Systems, and 98% don't even have that function, so... how? The System or AI should have simply told him while he was making his body. Anyway read it yourself, seems besides the loli part pretty average. But such simple things like that, makes me want to drop it instally. Btw your "Thumbnail" looks bad, many people would not even click at this because of that bad quallity picture you have. Just put a picture of a good looking girl or something like that.(which has good quallity) anyway Good Luck with your fanficđđand stop making him blushđđ
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LIKETokyoghost:don't forget the part where the loli goddess raped one of his girls behind his back
Tokyoghost:don't forget the part where the loli goddess raped one of his girls behind his back