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ThreeMilks875
ThreeMilks875Lv144yr
2021-02-08 11:16

If I were reviewing just based off of the quality of the novel, it would be an easy 5 stars. The grammar is very good and the novel is easy to read. The system is essentially the same as Warlock of the Magus world, but the author makes it his own with small changes and more emphasis on knight cultivation/body refining. MC is not a self righteous hero nor a evil and cunning villain, he is just a person trying to survive and become stronger. Interaction between characters is not amazing, but is decent enough in quality to not impede the novel. Overall, a very strong novel with few weaknesses. One defining factor that keeps me from giving it 5 stars? UPDATE TIMES. Book looks inactive and abandoned at first glance, but author updates at a speed of around 1 every two weeks or so. 5 stars on everything except update stability, which I gave two stars (Not one becuase at least the author updates it sometimes)

The Body Refinement Magus

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Pavan1234
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Until now this novel is a good Biochip/magus novel but heavily inspired from 'the wizard's world' and 'warlock of the magus world'. Still this is good spin on Biochip/magus genre (as the 'biochip in magic world' theme didn't lose it's novelty, atleast for me) . Mc's characterization is very good. Plot premise and plot progression are good. Plot Pacing is moderately paced. Character interactions are above average. Release rate is average. Hope author doesn't drop this novel. Most of the original biochip novel till now are dropped.

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Ethan132
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Amazing, would recommend to anyone. I’m a bit of a sucker for magic and a non idiot protagonist so I’m completely enjoying this book. Ty author :)

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Eggcellent
EggcellentAuthor

I am starting this story again after a long break Hopefully, you will enjoy it as much as before! For those who have not read this story yet, it depicts the story of a young acolyte walking the path of body refinement in a world where magic, magical beasts and knights exist.

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Ashu_Ra
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Interesting Beginning , let's where your story can lead us , readers

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NoobsGoToHeaven
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I am sure that as long as you are a fan of Warlock of the Magus World or A Wizard's Secret you will be able to enjoy reading this novel. The only difference between the main characters of others book is the fact that here our main character is trying to become both a warrior and a wizard simulantly.

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Shnoobs
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Great story so far (review at chapter 19). MC is intelligent and learns from his mistakes. World and overall story starting to take form and looks very promising.

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