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Hello author San... UR story has potential.. And u have a imaginative.. Mind. UR story is.. Good, hooked the readers.. Sink into world of fantasy u create... A magic.. And mermaid blessing.. Concept is new.. I LIKE UR STORY very much.. BUT U BADLY IN NEED OF A PROOF READER AND EDITOR.. AND BEHIND Every Original novel success is A Fixed Chapter Release Shedule AND the story is pacing forward not going round and round in circles.. Good luck👍👍😊😊

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Is always Happy After Ending?

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Yes, as I'm trying my best now before posting it to re-, read it and correct my mistakes. As I have Edited last few chapters. And from now I will be updating daily💜 thank you thanks a lot for the review!!!!