Hello author San... UR story has potential.. And u have a imaginative.. Mind. UR story is.. Good, hooked the readers.. Sink into world of fantasy u create... A magic.. And mermaid blessing.. Concept is new.. I LIKE UR STORY very much.. BUT U BADLY IN NEED OF A PROOF READER AND EDITOR.. AND BEHIND Every Original novel success is A Fixed Chapter Release Shedule AND the story is pacing forward not going round and round in circles.. Good luck👍👍😊😊
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