Review Detail of varean in Is always Happy After Ending?

I sense that you are one imaginative person. As I read your first few chapters, I can see that you're trying very hard to be as descriptive as possible. The amount of effort you put in this is commendable. Your novel seems very interesting too, I'm hooked. Though, we can't deny that there are plenty of grammatical and spelling errors. Some paragraphs are just difficult to read because of the mistakes. If you have time, you should go back to your chapters and do a bit of editing here and there. If you do fix your errors then I know, your story will come to be wonderful. Good job to the author! Keep updating <3