Review Detail of AriosAeonVonBelser in Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
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The MC really likes to be a slave huh? He follows everyones order. He teach anyone his magic. And he make extremely foolish decision like convincing his enemy to become his ally. For gods sake your not Naruto so don't use talk no jutsu cuase you suck at it. Because of this foolishness, this cause the life of his friend and trauma to Yuki. Also didn't he already teach his country men how to use magic? Why is he still teaching them can't hey experiment for themselves on how to use magic didn't he already said that the basic is hard but once you got the hang of it, it will become extremely easy to use magic and the MC's ally rely on him too much. They wanted weapon they go to the MC, they wanted to learn something they go to MC and the MC is just okay with halting or slowing his progress in magic. Honestly I just wan't the to have a love interest who can fight alongside with him and his ally can die for all I care cause they are just there to slow down the progress of the mc.
Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
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Same, I really hate it when half of the novel is about the mc helping people, and acting as a slave.. glad I didnt start reading it
DaoistCareFree:Tq i really hate this type of mc. He is strong but act like a slave and annoying ally who always depend on mc.
frealzilla:Your right he shoul be a super hardcore emo murder hobo like every other mc on this site. He should keep secrets like every other mc on this site. And if he is mildly helpful and shows any kind of respect to anyone we should all cry super manly tears about how he is a slave beta-cuck.
While I understand your perspective, I believe there could be alternative approaches to consider for the protagonist. Rather than conforming to the typical hardcore emo murder hobo archetype, perhaps the character could exhibit a unique blend of strength and vulnerability, allowing for greater depth and relatability. Instead of solely relying on secrets, the MC could embrace open communication and transparency, leading to intriguing plot developments and genuine connections with other characters. As for showing respect and helpfulness, it could serve as a catalyst for inspiring growth and empathy in others, creating a dynamic and engaging narrative. Exploring these alternative paths could bring a fresh and captivating twist to the story.
frealzilla:Your right he shoul be a super hardcore emo murder hobo like every other mc on this site. He should keep secrets like every other mc on this site. And if he is mildly helpful and shows any kind of respect to anyone we should all cry super manly tears about how he is a slave beta-cuck.