Review Detail of MatchaMilk in I lost everything but my will

Honestly, first of all I think the synopsis doesnt do the story justice, imo. I didnt read the tags at first so I was quite surprised to see that this had cultivation and a system! Either way its a pretty good story, it flows nicely and I really like the writing style as its written beautifully and emotional, fitting the tone of the story. We also get to know Jena through it better, the way her feelings and thoughts are expressed speaks to the reader. However, my complaint is, author please make shorter paragraphs! It will make the story easier to read and it would also benefit to let the dialogue stand on its own and not disappear in the paragraphs bc the dialogue is great and deserves it! All in all, great story thats totally worth giving a try! Hope author keeps it up!