Review Detail of Daoist829315 in I lost everything but my will

It's a good read... I did enjoy the story and I really want to know what happened (if Jena knocked out her mum before passing out.. Lol). The details are well elaborated to fuel the imagination; but please dont give away too much so the reader's mind still works to build more around the story. Take time especially to edit so there won't be too many errors. It's a really good one! Nice. Looking forward to the next chapter!