Review Detail of EspersLv6 in A Muggleborn Serpent. [Rewriting]

I recommend fiction as the characters are well described and the protagonist is not omnipotent. Other than that, this fiction is really well written. It has major flaws. 1) The best chapters were the non-canon ones. In short, the protagonist's school years. The first two canon years are very good and from the third year it starts to get worse. 2) Voldemort has a son.............................................................................. 3) I'm glad the protagonist doesn't solve every situation, but lately he's not doing anything. Now the protagonists are the children! 4) Dumbledore is not Dumbledore. His behavior is too different from the real character, at least in the last few chapters.