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Review Detail of DarthVegito in A Muggleborn Serpent. [Rewriting]

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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv103yrDarthVegito

Story was great until the The mc girl got the Cruciatus curse and then the story went downhill. he went to grindlewald to for help and then instead of the mc getting hos legacy she will. he beat belletrix early in the novel and was shown to be wayyyyy ahead of everyone but later in the novel he gets super nerfed lol honestly the story was a 5/5 before the girl got messed up. Its a remove from the lirbrary for me now

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A Muggleborn Serpent. [Rewriting]

Darkcrow8

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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10DarthVegito

You look outside your window and there is a bot..... they are everywhere

Darkcrow8:
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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10DarthVegito

Also this fanfic rstinh is boosted since some bot rated it a 5/5 multiple times smh

Darkcrow8
Darkcrow8AuthorDarkcrow8

He is way ahead of everyone and he is not nerfed, Bellatrix is just too strong. I mean there was a need for strong characters in the fanfic. It would be dull if the MC is just too OP and OP MCs and harry potter universe don't get along to well. as for Grindlewald's legacy. She just got his vault which only have a small fortune in it. As for the estate I mean Blair read Grindlewald's precious book from his personal library in the estate and *spoiler alert* She will not recover her memory and Blair will be her guardian so, Blair can access Grindlewald's Vault if he wanted to(Not that he will because he have plenty of money) but thanks for reading the fanfic anyway.

Darkcrow8
Darkcrow8AuthorDarkcrow8

I also hate bots and there are at least 2 to 3 bot reviewers. I just want honest reviews.

DarthVegito:Also this fanfic rstinh is boosted since some bot rated it a 5/5 multiple times smh
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

Harem..?

Darkcrow8:I also hate bots and there are at least 2 to 3 bot reviewers. I just want honest reviews.
Darkcrow8
Darkcrow8AuthorDarkcrow8

it's not a harem fanfic, Harry potter universe dosen't suits it.

Shadewind:Harem..?
Supreme_Devil
Supreme_DevilLv4Supreme_Devil

.....Who say so? Nobles houses bruh, the traditions don't die with those retard fcks

Darkcrow8:it's not a harem fanfic, Harry potter universe dosen't suits it.
Luxo
LuxoLv11Luxo

How was the review a bot review? Just curious lol

Darkcrow8:I also hate bots and there are at least 2 to 3 bot reviewers. I just want honest reviews.
Darkcrow8
Darkcrow8AuthorDarkcrow8

Luxo:How was the review a bot review? Just curious lol
The_Master_Zen
The_Master_ZenLv3The_Master_Zen

.. Uhh..... Are you perhaps talking about the noble houses of harry potter? You know, the houses where literally nobody, NOBODY, has a harem? Even Lucius Malfoy has one wife. If you're gonna bring up their stupid ideals and views, then at least bring up ones that actually exist.

Supreme_Devil:.....Who say so? Nobles houses bruh, the traditions don't die with those retard fcks
EpimetheusBB
EpimetheusBBLv11EpimetheusBB

Voldemort is a hundred times stronger than Belatrix. (I haven't actually read it yet, but I assume the mc is Tom Riddle from the name and what you're saying.) And OP mcs are not boring if there is a good author writing about them, but you can't do the cliche hero troupe of beating a villain and then meeting an even stronger one so you have to have a training montage and then beat the new villain, rinse and repeat.

Darkcrow8:He is way ahead of everyone and he is not nerfed, Bellatrix is just too strong. I mean there was a need for strong characters in the fanfic. It would be dull if the MC is just too OP and OP MCs and harry potter universe don't get along to well. as for Grindlewald's legacy. She just got his vault which only have a small fortune in it. As for the estate I mean Blair read Grindlewald's precious book from his personal library in the estate and *spoiler alert* She will not recover her memory and Blair will be her guardian so, Blair can access Grindlewald's Vault if he wanted to(Not that he will because he have plenty of money) but thanks for reading the fanfic anyway.